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Some things.

 

Falling asleep in my dreams.

Blue, blue ribbon of road.
The moon shines from not the sky,
But from the ground.
And from inside of me.
The sweet smoke of my breath.
The very light I exhale,
Freezes.
And all the noisy lights,
Hush.
Become a soft whisper.
In an ocean of blue wheat.

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morninglight
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51 days ago    Reply
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were there any stars?
 
neverever123
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48 days ago  
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There were. And they were beautiful but they didn't outshine the moon that night.
 
boulvard
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41 days ago    Reply
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Very interesting choice of words.. I like the way this came out. this paints a very interesting picture...tks Ds
 
neverever123
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36 days ago  
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Thanks. It's about this one night when I was high out in the country. It was surreal.
 
morninglight
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35 days ago    Reply
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sounds like a nice dream...a hopeful one
 


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