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Falling

I had forgotten about this one! I wrote it a long long time ago and just found it! haha hope ya like it!

Forgiveness is the answer, but there is punishment you see,
You act like a child, so treated as one you'll be,
You whine and you cry, you fight what is right,
There will be no exceptions, you must pay the price,
You act as though everything is okay,
But you know in your heart, you've gone the wrong way,
Now, don't think your punishment is yours to choose,
Because only god knows which to use,
So pray and ask god, your soul to keep,
Even when you fall, He'll help you to your feet.
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BreezyDaBlonde
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cute
 
ujjwal
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very true....being a non believr in god......aftr my breakup i was treated for depression and it was thn i strted believing in him........2day wrkng wth multinational its just him who has made me stand on my feet......."Even when you fall, He'll help you to your feet." great line and nice poem.
 
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Beautiful
 
jimmy3
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this one is awesome, just curious, is there someone in particular you are writing this about? or yourself?
 
galadriel
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nope, nobody in particular, just people in general i guess..........thanks for the comments!
 


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