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Falling!

Breath comes easy in the breeze,
Sensing the levity from these feelings,
Coming hard and fast but with ease,
You no longer being near, reeling.

You told me I had to share,
But he has you in his embrace,
My heart has one big tare,
Tears stream down from my face.

Why can I not feel your face,
Did we have to be,
The love leaves scars I cannot erase,
If I fall I know I will be free.

I look down from my perch,
My lonely heart peers into this abyss,
I feel my heart pushing as I lurch,
I step off into this.

Falling …
Was it worth it?
I will never need to know.
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hi
 
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hello my name is mimi i am 24years old my eamil address is mimi4evergreen@yahoo.com .
 
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hey... really good poem... i like it!!
 
tomoko91
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hey... really good poem... i like it!!
 
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whoa...
 
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Just read through all your posts and what can i say, wow!, im no expert but i think your work is brilliant, thanks.
 
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falling hurts
 
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Nice poem, you show a lot of emotion throug it. Nice work you got there.
 


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