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Eternal Despair

 


In the silence of the night,


Feeling you here with me.


Holding my breath in twilight skies,


Feeling so helpless and praying to see.


 


In many thoughts I would think,


You would see through my imperfections.


Hoping that you would really see,


The beauty in my eyes reflection.


 


Why am I not enough for you?


Is it me who should be to blame?


Many say that it is you all along,


Then why do I feel this shame?


 


I always wanted something real,


At least I thought you would try.


I tried so hard to hold it in,


But I couldn’t help to fall and cry.


 


What darkness has taken me?


For all I feel is your touch,


Seeing the world through jaded eyes,


Realizing that I can only do so much.


 


 


Darkness overcomes my heart,


As the moon light shines on my face


What can you do to mend my soul?


When all I see is your disgrace.


 


All that is left is Twilight Skies,


One true hope that is vaguely fare,


I will try and hold on,


From what seems like Eternal Despair. 


 

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Darkhorse07
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I will make some revisions to the last part when I get a chance, but I wanted to see what people thought of it.
 
greeneyedgirl
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One word really comes to mind............WOW...........Its beautiful, soul torturing,sad, intense I personally loved it....
 
Darkhorse07
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thanks :)
 
Trickstar7
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You have a gift sir, I once felt like you a long time ago.
 
Darkhorse07
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Yes I believe it's a universal feeling :)
 
alecia143
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I must say I am extremely moved by this...it is a universal feeling alright. One that we experience to much in life. Excellent job, I love it!
 
Darkhorse07
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Thanks :)
 


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