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Roselie Laurentia

 

Mystery Man

Your serenaded melody
trickles through my spirit
distinguishing my heart
that beats for you
pulsing blood that
feeds off you
entertwined souls
we drift towards
our shore of seclusion
engaging in war with love

I leave my
sacred footsteps
on the path of life
to retrace my
way back to reality
reluctantly

your soft lips caress
this skin of satin
gently filling me
up to my brim
soothing whispers
wash over me
as you take me
to your world
and give me all of you
as I am yours

Rolling in our bliss
comforting night skies
delegate a star
as our guide of light
illuminating our hearts
and allowing our flow of love
to bind us together

and as we float
back to our shore
I bid you farewell
and watch
as you drift away
stealing my mind
with a kiss

a murmured thought
depicts my wish
of a life with you
as you fade
back into my dreams.



Written & co by Roselia 2008
modified. 5.9.8

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Roselia
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Dammit, why do all the good stuff happen in me dreams.. Probably to make up for me lack of it, in reality yeah? Anyways just a few thoughts.. please feel free to comment, I love me some criticism good or bad.. hehe..

Tc
 
morninglight
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They say everything begins with a dream and you paint a beautiful image.
 
pirate151
pirate151
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Sometime life itself seems only a dream! But if we know what we are looking for maybe even seen in a dream! Then we would know who love was for!
 
JackEpsn1
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Good dreams are wonderful and even more when they come true. Have a good day.
 
Raconteur
Raconteur
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Aye me girl, yeah, I'm gonna have to like this un too.

Some great lines yer got goin' on here

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-sacred footsteps- Awesome

stealing my mind
with a kiss -Oh my, that's fookin' brill

a murmured thought
depicts my wish -reads like a blown feather

Very clever

Not to mention creative

Aye, Reality is oft' found lacking by far

As far as I'm concerned that is.

This pretentious notion, I'm sure, would most likely come from percieving it (reality) as substandard in contrast to me own conceptual world.

Even still, I must admit that indeed even I enjoy pretending from time to time that I am real.

Who said ghost?
 
Josh Wolski
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hmmm. I can't only love this to death....I sit here and I wonder what this is about.
 
Roselia
Roselia
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my dreams mate.. my dreams..
 
BobbiSue
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This is amazing. you have alot of talent in writing, i love writing about things that actually mean something to me just like i think you do. All your work inspires me to write more (:
 


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