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Destructive Love


A mother and child, lay on the beach


Looking up at the sun just out of reach


Child playing content, mother at ease


Time passes, mother is no longer easy to please


She wants child to grow up, to become mature


She screams and yells, believing that is the cure


Child grows in malice and pain


Growing more and more insane


Child becoming like mother, rotten to the core


Time passes again, mother still wants more


Her hand enforcing her will


Her rage lashing child, never having her fill


Child tired, follows his mother and lashes back


Hatred of her child is followed by this attack


More pain, more anger is thrown at child


No longer human, both are untame and wild


Mother throws child out


Tired of child, now a lout


Child wanders, growing lost


Alone, unloved, sanity the cost




lol this one is a bit different in style to the rest of my stuff, I don't know if it make sense... but then again I've realized that what ever my intentions of writing is, the story appears different to everyone based upon their personal experiences, lol perhaps thats is why I like to write. anywhooo any feed back would be cool, thanks!

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kellyvs
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it made sense to me and i love it
 
yuna25
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it made sense to me. i like it in a way and at the same time, its sad.
 
soulseeker22
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I like the poem, I just couldn't imagine that a mother could do that to her child, some mother she was...Aren't they supposed to be loving or something like that?:p
 
zaron17
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hehe the world can be a very nasty place and it doesn't have to be a physical mum, it could be two people, one who was supposed to care for a person, who has influence over them. ahh I dunno... take it as you wish, lol just glad you live in a world where this sort of thing does not occur ^.^
 
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this lessen 4 the other mathers.
 
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It gave me goose bumps. Well done!
 


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