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![]() | Nice, but some of it gets lost in translation (which needs some work). The story of the poem is familiar and comes through. "harsh reality of providence".....I thouht providence was a good thing....not something harsh. I guess some words seemed out of place. I'm figuring it's just the translator somehow. Please don't hate me for saying what I felt. Also, I don't think the hunter was so bad. Maybe, possibly, likely.....he did care about the subject of this pome. Perhaps more than she might have wished to realize. | ![]() | |||
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![]() | Thanks, I dont hate my critiques. My critiques are my best friends. Please advice me and help me out to write better. Thanks I m honored. | ![]() | |||
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