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Dance Of Wounded Tigress In Love

Dance of Wounded Tigress in Love


Kamlesh Chauhan


C@ Kamlesh Chauhan


Jan 9, 2004


 


 


My Soul Care free soul unaware of the world of Love shore


 


Walking, Dancing, Singing, Chatting silently in small pond


 


I spoke of tenderness while hiding some disappointments


 


I spoke of gentles after hiding the harsh reality of providence


 


 


I wanted a connection only with my own soul


 


I was unrevealed, veiled about my heart hole


 


Hunter came through the crack window of my heart


 


I was fanatical, find appealing jingle of his love song


 


Hunter made me his own, drenched in my bone


 


His love put my body in flame, my heart was in Blaze


 


 


I kept him like a rope of pearl, prized gem in my Neck


 


I danced without feet, couldn’t break the love bond


 


I was fevered with the intoxication without fault


 


Truth, Love, Honesty language was in his text


 


 


One the Harsh reality of life occurrence called


 


Their hand in hand joy walks along the pond


 


Unaware he set his eye on someone else too


 


I was just his mere joy of his wander heart


 


 


I cried, I shouted, I screamed with agony


 


I was lost in terrible pain ask for mercy


 


Tears eyes for him was just water salty


 


I danced all alone with my own agony


 


 


Copyright@ Kamlesh Chauhan


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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Justpassingthrough
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Nice, but some of it gets lost in translation (which needs some work).
The story of the poem is familiar and comes through. "harsh reality of providence".....I thouht providence was a good thing....not something harsh. I guess some words seemed out of place. I'm figuring it's just the translator somehow. Please don't hate me for saying what I felt.

Also, I don't think the hunter was so bad. Maybe, possibly, likely.....he did care about the subject of this pome. Perhaps more than she might have wished to realize.
 
Kamlesh Chauhan
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Thanks, I dont hate my critiques. My critiques are my best friends. Please advice me and help me out to write better. Thanks I m honored.
 


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