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Cold Air Lies Between Us

Deep breaths slowly escape my empty lips.

In a world as cold as the clouds that hold the broken fragments of my dreams.

These lips lack the passion and warmth that it once had with you near.

It seems I lost the proper words to say to you in a situation like this.

Maybe it's because i know that you are merely a ghost haunting me.

Stealing my breath way from my lungs.

Your nothing but a ghost, I keep repeating in my head.

And I'm just a shadow of my former self looking for ways to numb the pain.

Cold air lies between us. 


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Sad verse, but yer Poetic grace sort of entranced and distracted from the tragic emptiness of loss and vacant space.

Great 'sense play'

Y'gots it.

Take care,

'Anna
 


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