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Broken Wishes

she doesn't know why
but she's broken.
living her life in wonder
hoping that things will change.
but it never happens.

she wishes on every shooting star
for that wonderful happy ending.
believes in fairytales 
even though her life is anything but.
has dreams of her prince charming 
who will save her from the storms of her life.

she doesn't know why 
but she's broken.
living her life in wonder
hoping that things will change.
but it never happens.

when you look into her eyes
you see the scars on her heart.
everynight that she's cried herself to sleep.
everytime that she's prayed to God for her life to be different.
everynight that she's sat in her closet inflicting wounds to take her mind off the ones that are unseen.
everytime that she's told a lie to hide the truth of her pain.

she doesn't know why
but she's broken.
living her life in wonder
hoping that things will change.
but it never happens.

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Roselia
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Well written. I read this and instantly saw a reflection of myself (minus the self infliction of pain). I find that Im constantly asking myself why? and when Im feeling a particular way depressed, sad, self-absorbed etc.. I can't seem to find the reason why, I feel that way, all I know is I feel that way. Our minds work in the strangest ways. And it's only now that I realised why I was the way I was. I don't have your answers, only you do. But hopefully your pain will go away and you'll get to live care-free of all the obstacles in life that just make things so damn hard.

Great work and keep it up. Writing is a great way of venting and releasing them inner demons..

Take it easy

Roselie
 
pink_sj
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wow..thats great writing its great wen something makes u think and i guess aspects of ur poem relate to me.

great work
 


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