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Roselie Laurentia

 

Blocked out

It's hard to write
when all I see
is dark and night
distorted light
a new canvass lays before me
but Im unworthy of it
I stare with a passion
longing for inspiration
and still, see nothing
These tears fall
and yet I don't know
what they're falling for
lack of originality
change of mentality
a mind jumbled
as I've stumbled
to catch a shine
and still no vision 
the bonds are cut
where sense was last seen
and still this soul
tries to redeem itself
paralysis of thought
struggling to find
a way to portray
explicitly
these feelings
that have rendered me 
speechless
numb in mind
so why try
to put them down
when I can't avoid
this block in my way.

Written by Roselia

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ChrisJ20
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Good write! I know the feeling writers block can be a pain
 
Roselia
Roselia
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your telling me! lol... who writes about being unable to write? desperation much? haha- I've been searching and observing and looking and staring and feeling and etc.. and have yet to find my muse/inspiration.. Im patient, so I can wait a bit longer - something will hit me soon.. hahaha.. I think!
 
ChrisJ20
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lol yea I know what you mean,but I'm confindent that things will turn around for you. if it helps you can always remember this quote

"Everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt."
 
Roselia
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the worst enemy to creativity is self doubt - whoa that's profound and spot on..

thanks for that! Well thanks for being confident that things will turn around..lol, that's given me some hope, but I may kinda hovering over the line between writing good stuff and hopeless stuff, we'll see in time.. :)
 
ChrisJ20
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your welcome just keep at it eventually things will fall into place
 
brokenhere
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good poem, lol when i get writers block i end up writing some of my craziest abstract stuff, or just random poems.... idk i try and find inspiration, or i find inspiration in wierd stuff...
 


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