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Because of You

When I was just a little girl
you were my hero
I was your greatest fan.
You patched up my scraped knees
wiped my tears
and calmed my fears.
You held your breath
with each new step
letting my try my wings.
I crashed and burned
but in time I learned
because of you.
When I was a teen
you were my enemy
I was your disappointment.
You yelled and screamed
I said things I didn't mean
we fought all the time.
We said goodbye
I did my own thing
trying to fly with broken wings.
Again I crashed and burned
but this time I learned
because of you.
Now I have become a mother
you are the past
my child the future.
You've offered love and advice
I called you day and night
Mom, am I doing this right?
You helped me along
always showing me the way
letting me soar on my outstretched wings.
This time I did not crash and burn
all this I have learned
because of you.

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XjaylaX
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that is so amazing. i'm really enjoying all your writing. it's refreshingly good!
 
amoureuxdelalune
amoureuxdelalune
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thank you so very much! glad you enjoyed it.
 
morninglight
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Reading this I (up to 3/4ths the way through) I saw me and my daughter. Then, my only disappointment was that it was about a Mother. I should know by now, nothing more thankless than a Father. Mother's do get the lion's share of love and father's are throw-aways these days. But alas, Mother's Day is near and I should have known by now anyway. Still it was a very sweet poem spoken from true life-lessons.

You know, as a father.....I was a REAL MOTH'A !!! You know the ones hardest on us often love us most, but we don't realize until much later....years later. And then once we realize, we understand Love much better.
 
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my dad really wasnt around growing up, the memories i have of him are not fond. it hasnt been until recently,maybe within the last 10 years that he has mellowed out,not been so quick to anger.im finally able to have a relationship with my dad. something i wish id had from the begining. but better late than never i guess...
 
lovingyou
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life is amaizing...... i am glad i can read this .....
 


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