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Beautiful Canvas

Just around the river’s bend


Is a love which never ends


So very close but yet so far


I hold on to that falling star


 


Waves ripple from my heart


A warming sensation starts


Drink slowly and get your fill


Melt into my words which are real


 


Splashing moon with some paint


A beautiful canvas we would make


Swirled together in colorful hues


Shimming thoughts of me and you


 


Waltzing on white fluffy clouds


Romantic music plays out loud


Swept away in this heavenly dream


Feel the condensation from the steam


 

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che57vy
che57vy
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Ohhhh!! I love this! It flows beautifly AND you choice of words stunning as always ~c~
 
Encourager
Encourager
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Thank you girlfriend! Oops...I didn't post the form( poeitc pattern) in this one.
This is a Quatrain poem...4 lines each...with couplet rhymes...
YOU have a choice with this poem..you can rhyme 2nd and 4th lines ...or 1st with the 3rd AND 2nd with the 4th....gezzzz i sent you the notes! lol

YOU know how to do this one..I saw it a few times over on your site!
 
JungleJim
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Angel bows and morning kisses
gentle banter while helping doing the dishes...
Half fantasty, half real life would be best is seems
but for now, these are reminders of sweet dreams

The type of dreams we'd all like to feel
but which often are so out of reach
(you're very sexy as you preach
your Kalidascope poem seemed almost real)

but so much passion in the air
one might be so tempted to care
and the lure of lust seems sometimes unfair
only meant for the beautifully bare

Life the perfect creatures of book covers
and not the true lovers
who fight their lonley battles unknown
and hear the loud silence of their phone

These steamy poems are a nice escape
but set the bar of love and romance so high
I'm afriad gentle hearts they might break
well for now I can't say exactly why

but these dreams described make a weary heart
feel its own silent cry
I guess it passess by and by
But stars I guess do still fall from the sky

I Know, I've been chasing one
 
Encourager
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hmmm interesting response...thank you for your poeitc comments.SWEET!
What is meant by...you're very sexy as you preach? teach?
Good luck at chasing your star.
 


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