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Apple tree.

Girls
are like apples
on trees. The best ones
are at the top of the tree.
...
The boys dont want to reach
for the good ones because they
are afraid of falling and getting hurt.
Instead, they just get the rotten apples
from the ground that aren't as good,
but easy. So the apples at the top think
something is wrong with them, when in reality, they're amazing. They just
have to wait for the right boy tocome along, the one who's
brave enough to
climb all
the way to the top
of the tree.
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This is a very clever and very true poem..great job..your imagery is wonderful and your comparison to something simple like an apple..very creative..Polly
 


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