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An unwritten law



An unwritten law


You see the side of me that no one else see's,
everyone says,"stay away,like i have some infectious disease".
Even against what everyone says,
you try and see me,for whatever that is.
You gave me a chance,and hoped for the best,
for there was something about me,something that i possessed.
What was this thing about me that no one but you saw,
from the moment our eyes met,we would for surely be together;
an unwritten law


.joe 8/5/09

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BrianneDH
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103 days ago    Reply
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Thats gorgeus! I love it.
 
thee_cable_guy
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97 days ago    Reply
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Thanks,this was my first poem . Curious what other's would think of it...
 
AshNash
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Cool. That's really, really good.
 


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