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By imorangerain
05.08.2009
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always loyal life


	i've always been there just 'cause i care no matter the cost even when I'm lost You've always been my idol Not just my greatest friend Only now I still wonder how You can sit there Stare And ask "how are we friends?" How are we friends? You tell me. Looking up to see your face Drifting out in outerspace "Really, what do we have in common?" More than you know. More than you see. Does it even matter. I loved you But I don't think I knew you. But Ill always be here.

toobroke2fix

108 days ago Reply

sucks don't itr?

morninglight

106 days ago Reply

What you feel means a lot....even if it is unnoticed. Don't let it crush your tender heart.

I loved this line and the way "Stare" affected the tempo of your poem and helped me to imagine the moment you described:

"You can sit there

Stare"

imorangerain

106 days ago Reply

yeah, it was about my best friend, and he's like everything to me, i don't think he knows it though and we had a big fight and he doesn't think we're friends :( but thanks for liking my poem

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