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A day in winter

By xXxBriBabeszxXx
11.09.2009
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winter empty cry


	The cool air touching my skin The snow on the ground Walking outside and Theresz emptiness all around Feeling lost and stuck In a place so wide On my face frozen The tearsz that i cried Why couldnt tyme freeze So i can keep the moments i want Till i go back inside And they melt away Lyke firesz burning The pages of my story

Justpassingthrough

190 days ago Reply

This time the colors work a bit better! Those "z's" really detract from an otherwizzzzzzzzzzzzze nice poem. I think you're words though are very expressive. I'd like to freeze moments of time too...

sweet_dreamz

188 days ago Reply

i like this real deep.!

JackEpsn1

66 days ago Reply

Nice one! Flows well

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