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A Worried Heart

I heard your voice leaving me the sound it seemed to fade
The way you walked away from me left an everlasting crave
I was stuck waiting for your voice your smile
But then i realized I'd have to wait for awhile
I could almost feel the light swimming cross your hair
The way it moved seemed like an unbreakable piece of air
Then i swere i felt the rain on our skin
The way the thunder the lightning took us both in
For a second i Swere i felt your soft lips meet mine
But then i realized it was something in the back of my mind
I closed my eyes for a minute grasping how things were to be
But then i remember the problem and Now i can truly see
The way the light turns your eyes into a million bright stars
Makes me feel like i wont ever be too far
I have this place in my heart that i was holding for a girl like you
If only I would've known it would become this true

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as usual? and thank you for the correction haha im 15 i dont really think about that stuff (spelling) but thank you for feedback
 


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