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A Man

 


Yes, I am caring, nice, loving and sweet


 


Id love to sweep you off your feet


 


Cherish you, care for you and give


 


A life of chivalry you will live


 


 


 


This is not to be mistaken for weak


 


If you think that: our future is bleak


 


I give 150% and won’t ever be taken for granted


 


If un-appreciation is your way my view will be slanted


 


 


 


I will watch romantic movies with you


 


Even the ones that make you feel blue


 


I will hold and caress you with loving eyes


 


And yes, if you ask, I am a man who cries


 


 


 


I am also a man who knows when to get things done


 


When you need someone to go to bat for you I’m the one


 


I don’t back down, and will protect you from harm


 


There’s nothing I wouldn’t face for you that’s my charm


 


 


 


I will go with for a manicure and pedicure


 


We can come home and do facials for sure


 


I will be your best friend and lover


 


You will find no reason to want another


 


 


 


And in return you will do the same



Get comfy with me and watch the game


 


Eat pizza, wings and have a beer


 


I don’t need the guys if you are near


 


 


 


We can be silly whenever we want


 


Play games and each other we taunt


 


Just be crazy, giggle and laugh


 


These are things I have to have


 


 


 


An adult is something as well I’ll be


 


A mentor or father figure I can be


 


A child needs to feel love and always be secure


 


This we must give them with a heart so pure


 


 


 


Love is a gift we need not to ever ignore


 


This I will always give, just open the door


 


But like I said don’t take me for someone that’s weak


 


Just because I never forget your daily kiss on the cheek


 

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ayie
ayie
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simply beautiful! with a man like that there's really no reason to look for another! there should be a factory that produce guys like that, hehehe...cause its out of stock already!
 
Bri918
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ummm....when can u come and move to Cape Cod and be my man? lol
Amazing...well writen, I agree with "ayie" there should be a factory that produces this kind of man!
 
pink_sj
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my god youve got the ladys fallin at your feet lol,very nice poem in life wether your a man or a women,a thief or a king,rich or poor we all want the same we all want love we just dont know how to persue it!and youve just described that perfectly its the ideal idea of love!
 
Josh Wolski
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THis is good I also agree, if I may make a suggestion though. I would bring down the font size. While this is a good read, having to scroll so much and focus on one word at a time instead of the overall meaning in each sentence or stanza, takes away a little from actually feeling like your enjoying what you reading. It becomes a task and not a natural interest to read. To me atleast.

Great work!
 
MPetrie
MPetrie
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thanks Josh, you are absolutley correct. I dont mean to double space or spread it out so big, sometimes when i copy and paste from my word thats what it does??? thanks for the comment!
 
bluerain109
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perfect man! i doubt i could find such a man for me, hehe :D
you are such a man that all girl will dream of and long for...lol
 


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