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Daddy where'd you go?

I was little and didn’t know
But when you held me in your big arms,
I always wished you would never let go.
Daddy, I thought you loved me,
I thought you cared,
But then you made me scared.
You treated mommy bad,
And that made me very, very sad.
She said you were leaving,
Somewhere unknown
And from then on I felt alone.

Days passed and mommy cried
She said she wished you would of died.
I visited you every now and then,
You had a good life,
But then again, also a soon to be wife.
Not just one but a couple, as well.
You just wouldn’t tell.

Daddy, why are you so screwed?
So messed up inside?
Is it like a family feud?
Did your dad treat you like this too?
Daddy, love sucks.
And I’ve learned that from you
I sure do hope you’re happy about it too.

Now I sit here,
Shaking with fear.
I got the call today, daddy
They said you were drunk,
Man, you’re so crunk!
I guess mommy got her wish,
You died all the way,
I look at your coffin,
But I don’t dare to pray.
I’ll never feel the same way, daddy.

Now I’ve found him,
The one and only.
He treats me right, daddy.
I just thought you should know, that your little girl,
Is growing up to be quite the little Miss. Hoe!
But don’t worry,
I wont go in your direction,
For I know that he’ll treat me right.
Unlike the way you treated mom all night.
And now I’m older and I know,
That he’ll hold me close with his big arms
And he’ll never let me go.



Written by kelseywontgivein


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that "little miss hoe"line destroyed a piece of work that could have been quite charming.
 


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