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By Lulu
05.08.2006
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Love Poems


	I love it when you lay down and fall asleep in my arms, The thought of your safety is all I think about I'm always in your heart and especially in your dreams, No matter where you are or what it seems. I saw this beautiful girl who caught my eye, I wanted to talk to her but I was way to shy. My heartbeat beating fast and my pulse getting stronger, Bones getting tighter, I just couldn't hold on any longer. I had to tell her everything from the beginning to the end. I have loved you ever since the day I saw you. Your beauty is undescriable that no one could ever draw you. Your soul is so pure that no one could ever change the way you are. Your heart is so big that no one could ever love as big as you. I wish you were still here but your not anymore, I still think of you when I see the blood stains on the floor. I hear the screams and crys through the darkness in your room. *Written by Lulu* Submitted by Lulu

lisa

849 days ago Reply

I love the poem

Ashley

848 days ago Reply

I really like the poem. it was great.

Kristi

847 days ago Reply

This poems reminds me of how me and my lovely boyfriend got together. And its going on two years in october.

Kristi

847 days ago Reply

This poems reminds me of how me and my lovely boyfriend got together. And its going on two years in october.

Roselia

159 days ago Reply

Very deep.

Sad how sometimes the greatest of relationships can end on such bad terms.

A typical scenario - this kinda love is common, boy likes girl, too shy to approach, then they end up together & vice versa.

Your way of writing the piece was quite original though - not your everday read - the ending was a bit sad..

But I kinda expected - keep writing, you got some good stuff!

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