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In The Dark

You left me there,
To rot and die.
In the shadows,
I forever cry.
How could god,
Bring this fate.
Who I meant to love,
I'll always hate.

As a child,
I got no bye.
Sixteen years,
Not one hi.

In a jar,
Closed the lid.
Forsaken me,
Is what you did.

In the dark,
Is where I wait.
For that person,
Maybe he's just late?



Written by St4rboy


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Sheena A
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wow, I like it, its truthful and heart felt. like the photo too!!! if you dont mind me asking, whos that to??? I think you rock at writing and should keep doin' it!!!
Sheena A
 
Mariam
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Hi, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It makes a lot of sence to me. Are you the one that left me a comment on one of my entries, the one tittled Forever In Wonder? if so your story sounded very sad as well I can see how you related to mine, Im really sorry about what happened with you, and it sounded to me like she doesn't deserve someone like you, and she only came back to you all those times because she knew how you felt about her and when she was in need she knew youde jump up for her and be there, but when she was feeling better she acted coldly and drifted away again... I feel your pain as well. If you want to contact me here is my email mariam_aramyan@yahoo.com, I'd love to hear from you. Thank you for reading my story... :) hope to hear from you soon.
 


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