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Sweet little razor blade

A cut of the wrists, a quick little slice
At first its free, but pains the price
You long to feel, the pain inside
A little part of you, that you couldn't just hide
Your life is a mess, a cant keep it together
Your failing in school, your thoughts just won't gather
But now it done, your decision made
A quick cut, with my sweet razor blade

One night at home, sitting alone
Your girlfriend is leaving, and wontanswer the phone
You leave your self thinking, what did I do
My sweet little razor blade, i'll never leave you.



Written by daniel porter


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Sheena A
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Wow.. truthful, I like it. Have you ever read the book "cut"??? its good its like your poem and tells it like it is. I also wrote a poem like this a little less than a year ago... Keep it up and dont forget... you are you and no one can change that don't give in to any one
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how sweet ur poem was good it made me wanna go cut my wrist not in a bad way tho
 


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