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Caught Between Goodbye And I Love You

Now I'm caught in between,
Among two hard feelings.
I love you that's all I know,
But this feelings I will pursue?
If I choose I love you,
My heart will rejoice I know.
From the day till night I'll set beside you.
But am I be fortunate if I go with you?

You are my life and my love.
But love alone is that enough?
To fight for the obstruction, the world had?
It is enough to live and love?

If I say the word goodbye,
For me it was so hard.
In this world your all I had,
In mylife your the only one I loved.

Leaving you makes my heart sad,
But choosing you will be so hard.
Now I'm caught between freedom,
And mylife without you my love.

Now I have to think side by side,
Either to hold and to love.
Goodbye are the words in my mind had,
I love you are words my heart loved...



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Taz
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very good, but a little work needed on your grammer darling.

But it is very good...
 
heaven
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i love ur poem i can relate....
 


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