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My last day

If this was my last day,
would you treat me any different?
Would you love me more?
Would you tell me?
Would you cry?
Would you?

If this was my last breath,
what would you want me to say?
That I love you?
That I forgive you?
That I will always love you?

If this was my last moment,
Would you dance with me?
Let me die in your arms?
Would you kiss me...
like I dream you will?

If I had one last wish,
it would be that you would love me.
Unconditionally,
Unlimited
Forev er
and ever
and then some more

And if I had one last regret,
it would be that I
couldn't tell you this
whilst I still had more than one breath.



Written by IIIIIvicIIIIII


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i really liked your poem i kinda got goosebumps at the end but in a gd way. keep up the gd work
 


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