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Her and you

Please don’t leave her here...
With these blinded options and fights.
She doesn't function right without you
And you're her only and last hope to make her all right.

Why do you want to drag behind all these lies?
Why don't you just change your life if you don't understand anything? Here she is, she cries.
And what will you decide to do?
Don't walk away...
Don't let the night turn into day,
Until you take a hold of her soul,
Make her feel loved and make her whole.
Until you've captured her heart forever,
Until you've made her yours and pieced her together.



Written by GoLd


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This touched me so much.I'm feeling this way now.You wrote the words I was feeling.Thank you this poem is special.I love it.
 
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Well, just because all of you think i'm not good, doesn't mean i'm going to stop, I know i'm not the greatest thing, but i'm happy with my life and I write poems to express what I feel. well, see you later. =) bye.
 
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P.S- I know you wrote all of those comments john. its pretty obvious, look at the times, all you did was switch up the names and e-mails, who are you trying to play dumb? lol, I know my work isn't that sh*tty. those comments aren't true. Anyway, I just see that as a pathetic move, john how could you swoop so low? lol, it makes me laugh. wow, just coz you sh*t on your mom, doesn't mean i'm as gillible as her. lmao. =) :p
 
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Well john your not as smart as you pretend to be.All those comments was from you and basically said the same things.Gold this poem is awesome so plz dont let this little *sshole try to convince you otherwise.He is just jealous that he cant write like that.ok
 
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what the f*ck are u on about for f*ck sake,check the b*stard emails,i cant even believe u are blameing me ffs,o my god,dont even dare pin this on me ffs.now that really is f*ckin stupid that,open your eyes,check the emails,why the f*ck wud I do that,jeeeez.dont blame me for them hateing u.you guys are really f*ckin low,and me being sh*t on my mum what the f*ck is that u stupid b*stard.your gonna have many angry people on your case now.i demand a f*ckin appology for that.no need at all.
 
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I'm sorry, and no offense, but I kinda think that your poems suck too. Again, sorry, but that's just how I feel.
 
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who me sensations....who you talkin bout here?
 
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I am talking about Gold. I just can't seem to feel her work. I guess it is just not anything I can relate too. Sorry!
 
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Its ok sensations, we all have different opinions. Personally, I don't write to be excellent or impressive to anybody, I do it to let my feelings out. Well, thanks for the comment. bye
 
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Oh and john, whether or not you posted those comments, I just want to let you know its all behind us.
 


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