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My mum sat and cried alone

By john-paul
20.04.2006
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	My mum sat and cried alone, tears rolled down her face and turned to stone, I held her close and kept her warm. Gave her shelter for in the distance came a storm. Momma isn’t daddy back, I’m getting scared and that’s a fact. Why are you all dressed in black. One day I will have children of my own. But I’m afraid they won’t have me. Please release me from this image, this is no way to be. I don’t want to be sad for ever mum, but we just got hit by the storm I know you agree. He has gone to the light at God’s heavenly hall. I will show them hell before they take me and see my life fall. I will not join you even though I miss you. But I have your family to take care of now. And you can’t take me that I will not allow. So I wake and I wonder what can I do. I hear a whisper in the back of my mind tell me to get up and live. Get out your bed, wipe your tears and show you still have strength. So I did, and I shown my family how to do it as well. I do write from the Heart as you can tell. So don’t criticize me for writing for my family you can go to hell. Read this gently and say your fare well. As I have finished this poem so I wave my goodbyes. *Written by john-paul* Submitted by john-paul

GoLd

955 days ago Reply

By the way, you said I didn't read your poem, that I was commenting to stick up for my friend. Well, let me tell you a little something... I DID READ YOUR POEM. and to be honest, I was seroius about your poem's simpleness. What I wrote is exactly what I felt. ..... =)

john-paul

955 days ago Reply

ok then gold,say what u like,but iym far from simple,very much complicated actually,i have very mixed up feeling at the moment,and iym trying to get them out,iym not trying to impress any 1,iym trying to get my feelings of my chest,i dont want to be sad no more,and writing my work,makes me feel better.so if you want to disrespect poetry meant for my family who are grieveing then it is you that is just sick,might wanna go pick on some 1 else,i dont have the strength any more,i will most certainly let u know wen I do.

val

953 days ago Reply

John I can relate to this poem.My dad was my moms first love and when he died she was crushed.My dad has been dead for 6 years and I still hurt inside cause he was my heart.My dad was my hero.It hurts and I understand your pain.god bless

john-paul

952 days ago Reply

thats more like it val,thank u very much for the comment and I hope u and your mother are ok now,its hard times to get thru,each month felt like a year with out him,iym sure u can agree.

Roxanne

938 days ago Reply

By the way gold dont put my brother down about his poetry you obviously dont know what your on about, that potry is coming from a 17 year old bot who has more grief in his life then you will ever probably have !!!

dancefanatic

684 days ago Reply

It's so hard to loose a loved one because i've lost both my parents when i was 16. I'm now 19 and still have coping issues.

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