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The beginning

Let me tell you the secrets you've been wanting to hear,
The absolute conciousness that builds up your fear.
I've been wanting you for a long time, but I've seen nothing at all.
I'm willing to follow you anywhere and I'm risking to fall.Thoughtless minds, damaged hearts and endless souls,
Every little thing that makes us whole.



Written by GoLd


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john-paul
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hello,i see your a ok poet,i like this poem indeed,this is my type of poem,when I critisized your friends poem,it was because I dont like that sort of poetry,i like poems that go with the flow,so if u have a problem with my work,email me,because when you critisized my poem,u didnt read it at all,u just sticking up for your friend.and thats pretty lame,so its simple,DONT read my work,they aint for you,or any 1 else,i have them for my girlfriend and my dad,so fairwell.
 
john-paul
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lmfao hahahaha,who the f*ck you callin a prick,me and val are settling things,and your just like an annoying b*tch of an itch,i leave u a nice comment,saying I like your poem,so stick up for your friend its not my fault I think they are sh*t pieces of work,every 1 has a right to critisize so stuff you,just because you and all your friends bum off her poems,dont mean every 1 else needs to,ffs.
 
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Hey john this sh*t right here is uncalled for.You a man right cause right now you lookin more like a b*tchie girl.You think my work is sh*t cause your jealous.Must be hard to live with that.Dont talk to my friends that way.You dont like my poems then you dont have to read them.Your work aint that great either,and the ppl must think so too cause you dont get many votes or comments.Stop tryna be shakespere,you are far from it.
 
john-paul
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lol val hahaa,no votes for my work,your obviously blind,10 out of 10 say my new poem is excellent,i have about 13 comments,so open your eyes,why would I be jealous of u any way,lol.plus iym not as old as u think,younger than 18,your probably about 40.just wait till I been doin this a few years.its all down hill from here.
 
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Yeah john obviously your a immature little boy by the way you talk but im not 40,more like 25.You are so bent on trying to get on my nerves but john im much more mature than a little sissy boy like you.I dont know why you are attacking gold over me but its getting a little outta hand and you need to grow up a little and change ur attitude.Nobody likes a know-it-all that really dont know sh*tt.So shut up and write ur lame poems and leave us alone.
 


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