Hi Hilary,
I think that your poems are truely heart felt and I do like them alot. I too have been hurt so much by love. I know how you must feel!!. You are doing the right by expressing what you feel in words. In time to come you realise that this is the best way for you to get through. I feel your p*ssion in your words and I admire your strength.
Thankyou for saying what you truely feel, it's so uplifting to know that I am not the only one!!
Mark.c

Hey Hilary!
First of all, Im gonna keep it real. I won't say that I can relate to you. Because, right now in my life, I can't. Although, I've been there before Ma! I'm much better now, because I followed the advise the Psalmist wrote it the bible, at Psalms 55:22. Now, hold on! Before you freak out! I'm not tryin' to preach to you. I don't know how spiritual your are. (but it doesn't matter, you don't have to be) Just take the advise given if you could. It is very up building. It really helps. It helped me! I think you're very skilled when it comes to writing poetry. So, Good luck girl, and keep ya head up Ma. "Every wound heals with the proper care"!!!

I love this poem its soo good!