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Drink Driving

I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, mom
So I had a sprite instead.
I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would,
That I didn't drink and drive,
Though some friends said I should.

I made a healthy choice,
And your advice to me was right,
The party finally ended,
And the kids drove out of sight.

I got into my car,
Sure to get home in one piece,
I never knew what was coming, Mom
Something I expected least.

Now I'm lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mom, his voice seems far away.

My own blood's all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
This girl is going to die.

I'm sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high,
Because he chose to drink and drive,
Now I would have to die.

So why do people do it, Mom
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
Like a hundred stabbing knives.

Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
Tell daddy to be brave,
And when I go to heaven,
Put "Daddy's Girl" on my grave.

Someone should have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,

I'd still be alive.
My breath is getting shorter, Mom
I'm getting really scared.
These are my final moments,
And I'm so unprepared

I wish that you could hold me Mom,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, "I love you, Mom!"
So I love you and good-bye.


Written by hunni


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Amy
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I think this poem is sad but I really like it!!
 
Kasey
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I have this same poem in my daughter book from school when she took a cl*ss in school in the 5th grade a police officer gave this to all the kids it was from a dare program that all school has in ohio
 
Melissa
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that is a really good poem but you didnt write it. I have the same poem from that I got in an email. try writing something of your own. and if you didnt write it then dont say you did.
 
Dreamweaver
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This is not an original poem. It was around when I was still in high school. It is a very good poem, but you should think twice before publishing something you didn't write as your own original work.
 
sally
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I loved da poem is it a true story? it mad me and ma frends cry. u should keep up da gud work. it was a excellent poem u should be proud!!! and NEVER DRINK AND DRIVE!!! and never leave a party when everyone else leaves it corses troma. thanks for the poem for everyone to read. it was MAD!!!!
 
sally
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I was just reading what oder people rote in comments and no affence but u shouldnt take all da credit for it!! soz I never new u wasnt DA writer.
y did u say u wrote it?
but I still think it was a gud peom...........
 
Sarah
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hi, I thought this poem was excellent, I dont care that u didnt write it, it just moved me so much, I have lost sum1 through drink drivin and it broke my heart to read it.
 
Sarah
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hi, I thought this poem was excellent, I dont care that u didnt write it, it just moved me so much, I have lost sum1 through drink drivin and it broke my heart to read it.
 
Emma
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I love this poem it really makes u think I used this poem in my drama piece last year it made most to the audiace cry !!!! I love it so much who eva did it welldone
 
Kylie
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who cares if this girl didnt write it at least she had the courage to actually submit this poem maybe she just wanted to let the world know about this important and sad topic. it is very heart breaking I once3 saw a car crash and I dont think I will ever get over it.
 
Lauren
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you have not wrote that poem so I don't think people should be giving you prise for something you haven't done
 
Amanda
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hmmm..... sad but true
 
alma
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This poem is really good..It really moved me...When I was 3 years old my twim brother, Muhamed, was killed by a drunk driver...And my parents were both killed by a drunk drive on August 26, 2000....I think people that DRINK AND DRIVE NEED TO GROW THE F*CK UP!!
 
phoebe
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hiya when I was 7 I was in a car crash with my uncle aunty and all my cousins,
every1 but me died, even my cousin, 6week old emily, who was sitting right next to me. it was the 19 year old drink driver who was being stupid, my uncle tried to swerve but couldn't in time. I heard that the driver was completely paraletic and all the p*ssenger were blind drunk aswell, they ended up hitting a tree but they didn't die, it isn't fair. although it isn't the first time ive read it its still true. thanx for putting it up, it lets people know the effect of drink driving even if your not the drunk driver.
 
Jessica
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It was soooooooooooo awsome
it really touched me not to drink and drive. even if u didn't right it it was still Gr8. it was so sad and made me cry. is it a ture story? well anyway it was so cool
 
Bianca
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I read this peom out in my cl*ss last year and my teacher started crying this is not a orginal you didnt write it I like this peom its really true and sad but if you want to take credit for this you should write your own orginal peom but I love this peom!
 
Bianca
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I read this peom out in my school last year and my teacher started crying this is not a orginal you didnt write it I like this peom its really true and sad but if you want to take credit for this you should write your own orginal peom but I love this peom!
 
Amanda
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The poem you have wrote was very good and it got to me.
 


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