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Pregnancy

What do you do when you know he's ready
would you let him know or hide it secretly
would you let him know his time has come
to be a man and raise a son
would you let him know just whats going on?
Your moody and hungry and gaining more weight
would you let him know before you start to show?
He wants a family just not right now
should I let him know or let him find out all on his own
he's not ready for this
he's just begun to live


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JoAnna Sheppard
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ok first line is wrong it's what do you do when you know he's not ready
 
Lindsay Laird
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pretty good ... I like it ... I like the line, "would you let him know his time has come
to be a man and raise a son" it's one of those things that doesn't completely rhyme, but sort of does ... cya at school. luvyamuch. oh, and it's "you're" :-P
 
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thank you I actually agree with those 2 people...that said it was junk
 


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