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I didn't drink mom

I went to a party mom,
And I remembered what you told me not to drink
So I drank a coke instead.
I felt very proud inside the way you said I would.
I didn’t drink and drive mom though the others said I should.
I know I did the right thing mom.
I know you’re always right.
Now the parties finally ending as everyone drives out of sight.
As I get into my car mom I knew I would get home in one piece
Because the way you raised me, so responsible and sweet,
But as I pull onto the road mom
The other car didn’t see me and hit me like a load.
As I lay here on the pavement mom,
I hear the policeman say "the other guy is drunk" and I will pay.
I wish you would get here soon mom.
How could this happen to me mom,
My life burst like a balloon.
There is blood all around me mom, most of it is mine.
I hear the policeman say, "I'll die in a short amount of time."
I just wanted to tell you mom I swear I didn’t drink.
It was the others mom, the others didn’t think.
He didn’t know where he was going mom,
He was at the same party as I,
The only difference is he drank and I will die.
Why do people drink mom, it can ruin your whole life.
I’m feeling sharp pain now, pain just like a knife.
The other guy is walking and I don’t think that’s fair,
I’m laying here dying mom, while all he can do is stare.
Tell brother not to cry mom, tell daddy to be brave,
And when I get to heaven write, "Daddy’s girl" on my grave.
Someone should’ve told him not to drink and drive,
If only they would’ve taken time mom,
I would still be alive.
My breath is getting shorter mom,
I’m becoming very scared.
Please don’t cry for me mom,
Because when I needed you, you were always there.
I have one last question before I say good-bye,
I didn’t ever drink and drive mom,
So why am I the one to die?


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Sugar
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This is an amazing poem it brought tears to my eyes, so many mothers lose there children this way and this is very touching and it has great meaning keep up the excellent work and keep spreading the meaning around drinking and driving is a very seriouse thing and more people need to hear poems like this.
 
Sabra
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omg thats so crazy my cousin died this morning in his car but I dont knwo if he was drinking they are running tests on him now his mom is totally wrecked now I feel so sorry for her
 
Noodles
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Man that poem was sooo great!! It really touched my heart and it shows that sometimes life can really be unfair!!! And how sometimes other people pay others mistakes!! But life goes on!! I loved it very much : ) !!!
 


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