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One shot

Why didn't you listen to me?
You could save me,
But you couldn't see.
Then one day,

No more to say.
Took a box from under the bed.
Raised the gun to my head.
With one shot... I was dead.
With one shot... my pain went away.


Written by gonna_die232


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I liked your poem. dont mind what the other person said. this is a very good poem. I feel like that sometimes
 


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