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To all who've lost love in life

By Goodlogic
20.10.2005
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Love Poems


	To all who've lost a love in life this poem is just for you It's just the way I think of things it's just my point of view The clouds will clear the rain will stop the storm ahead will pass So please don't think its over for you or I'll have to kick your ss Love is like a video game sometimes you lose a heart But if you die while playing the game just simply hit restart You'll play some levels you've played before but its never quite the same There's always secrets and things you'll find while playing a brand new game Though you'll feel bad and sometimes sad and have a great big frown Don't give up hope your connections just slow or the server might be down Some kid once said somewhere I read I think he was from the south He said love was when your name was safe In someone elses mouth That kid is smart at only six hes got a lot to grow But even he sees how it works there's so much in life to know This sucks sorry Written by Goodlogic* Submitted by Goodlogic

Juiceee

1613 days ago Reply

I thought it was really good, the ending could have been better but you did a wonderful JOB. Keep up the good work and remember LOVE & LIVE LIFE!!!

HoneyShell75

1612 days ago Reply

I loved this!!! This is perfect for a friend of mine..he will relate to this soooo good! Cute little poem!

DANNY

1611 days ago Reply

it really sound like u've gone trough thik. the poem is really good but u have to clean it up. give it a strong sound by making comments like it's all gona be ok. any way is a really good poem and all people that write poems like u and me think that they poem suk but to other people it sound just good.
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