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Cutting the memories

Remenicent
standing on the brink of reality
ready to fall into my hole of pain
all the cuts are the memories
and days spent lonely in the rain
what silver blade pierced the skin
the blood stains the carpet,
my life, my kin
all the blood
symbolizes the feeling
that I need to lose
I can't stop
each red line represents
the life I dont want to lead
the scars stay forever
just as the memories will
a flashback of hunger
of hatred
of force
I'm losing myself
to what was never real
and all the memories
are what make me feel
feel all of the things
that no one should even know
all of the cuts
let me know that me, and me alone
can control the future
the one which I will not have


Written by Julie Hobson


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ImJustMe
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I know exactly how that feels.Your poem is really awsome.....I understand it.My poems are built around the same things....But like I said I really like your poem!
PEACE!
 
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Hey sweetie, this poem really makes me think of the times we stopped for each other. I want you to know that I am proud of you (i know i`ve said that countless times). I love this poem, but not as much as I love you!
 
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This poem is amzing !
 


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