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Ouch...

It seems as if whatever I try to do,
Just gives me more pain to go through,
And whenever I voice out my pain,
It all goes in vain…
People expect so much from me,
They just don't want me to be,
Who I am,
I'm just stuck in a world of sham…

I hate feeling this way,
And I just wish I could see a brighter day,
My heart just doesn't seem to mend,
And Life is just a book that never ends..

One moment I'm hanging on to my own last breath
And the next I just wish for my very own death,
But I know that one day things will work out,
But till then, all I can do is shout…

I'll keep my pain to myself 'cause no one seems to understand,
The little girl that I am inside, and the person that I am,
Counting the tear drops, dripping from my eyes..
Thinking of the nights I had endless cries,

Yes, dear one, this is all coz of you..
Don't you understand that what I feel inside is true?
You may think that I haven't experienced life;
But you’re the one I want and that's clashing with strife..

Please..please release my heart from this cage.
Coz with each passing day, I'm filled with rage..
The only one that could help me is you..
To heal my wound and to save me from the pain I'm going through…


Written by Susu


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HoneyShell75
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great poem.....been there!
 
Tara
Tara
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I know exactly what you mean I am there right now, and I want nothing more than for this feeling to go away. I love this poem so much and it describes me and my situation so completely that I put some of it in my AIM profile...
great job at expressing what I cant
 
Daniel
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Well done that was really good I almost felt it. Really good
 


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