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The black rose

Here you are again...
not just beside me
but inside of me...
and my heart is brokenshattered pieces lying around.
I hope I'm in the place I need to be...

A cold place...
this lonely dark room...

And your staring at me...
And your eyes...
your eyes...
They consume.

What is going on?
I dont know what to do...

And then I see the rose...
Wilted
Black
Dead...
And it represents me...
me and you.


Written by StRaNgEr


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hagakurepinoy
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1530 days ago    Reply
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I wish I didn't feel that way...but I do....
 
Ashley
Ashley
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this is a pretty deep poem... well done
 
iiks
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woohh... nice
 
incomplete_me
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i could feel you.. and you were able to elaborate the emotions that you felt through this poem..keep it up!!!
 


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