I have never read a poem that really hit home for me as this poem just did. Thank you

lenay. what a strong woman you have been forced to become, and you can express yourself like this. no matter how hard your shell is always, always, express yourself. someone will see/read those true colors and you will make all the difference in their lives. which eventually brings your spirit back. you have potential to be a great writer. keep at it. much love and strength for you girl. one.

hey,

omg I luv this peom..you rly know how to espress yourself. noone has ever wrote a poem that has hit me this hard....Thanks you. I can't believ someone has actually went rhought this... xoxo

hey girl well we both have the same problems iwent thru alot 2 N I know it´s hard when people critize N think that because of wat we went thru we will make the wrong choices in life 2 but wat we went thru is to give us streight to be strong N so little things won't hurts us because we know wat pain is N I can honestly tell you that we are strong and the survival of everything i'm not scared of wat can happen 2 me N E more i'm passed my past now I have a new war 2 fight N thats kepping my 3 bb's out of those things I know I can't always b there but I will fight so nothing can hurt them like my child hood hurted me. So kep being strong we can't fight everything except for death so God bless.

wow!

it aint even go together right. Shawty probably aint even went through half that cr*p she speakin bout'. She 15 and in that "mad at tha world" stage. She'll be aiight...

You Go Girl. Very powerful and true. Keep up the GREAT work.