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Hold on

An obscure feeling,
hides behind my heart
lingers and weakening me
pulling my veins
burning my skin.
as I close my eyes
my soul beggins to pray.
hoping that this feeling
is not here to stay..
I wish I could
make this go away
I wish I could
spread my wings and fly away
I hope you could hear me,
please hear me say
youre a part of me
please dont fade away..


Written by MaCk


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Erica
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Your poem is amazing... I know exactly how you feel.. I think everyone feels like that atleast once during their lives, but you express it and I think that is awesome... keep up the good work1!!
 


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