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Abusive Heart

I'm a total screw up
Who never does anything right,
You yell at me all day
And all thru out the night.There must be something wrong
It seems I just don't think
With every hurtful word
I feel my heart sink.

You look past my tears
What is it that you see,
You make it very clear
You can't love someone like me.

You need someone good
Who knows just what to do,
Nothing that I do
Is good enough for you.

I walk on pins and needles
Waiting for your ire,
A friendly smiling face
Has become my only desire.

The me inside is gone
Torn down by your hate,
My only hope left
Now waits at Heaven's Gate.

Peace of heart has passed
My love still is yours,
No longer do I matter
As I cry behind closed doors.

I don't believe it's all
My fault as you say,
Though my spirit is wounded
I'll live to fight another day.

Please look beyond your hate
And see if you still care,
Am I still the woman
Who in your life you share?

Look quickly before I die
Or my spirit withers away,
Do you love me still
Or has it gone astray?

by: Araine Pesimo


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Your poetry is very good, but you need
to turn the table around and where you
have "you" put "I" and take the bull by
horns and ship him off to Mars where the
rest of the toxic people live. Who the
hell needs that pile of cr*p anyway????
 


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