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A moment in time

I lay back and think of what is was we had;
nothing to damn special, then again, it wasn't bad.
A book of your life you wrote for me to have and to hold;
you shared your inner most thouhgts some so deep and others quite cold.Promises of life's love and happiness you put on my plate;
for youclaimed all this was mine and what we shared was fate.
Now with seasons change so doe syour mind which is wrong;
I thought we shared 'Love and Happiness' like that good old school love song.
But still to this day I sit and cry day after day after night;
and wish just one wish to have your arms hold me tight.
My emotions now twisted I woman enogh to admit,
but that wouldn't have happened had we talked just a bit.
As I come to this end and realize that I will miss and love you always;
a pedge of true devotion I give to you not just now but for all days.
You took my heart I gave and claimed your heart was mine,
but that's not what's true and all you left me was an empty moment in time.


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you've got to work on spelling other than that it was pretty good
 


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