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The breakup feelings

Here she is thinking of the past
How she's learned and matured so fast
Under lock and key all her life
She strives...
Thinking of him
How he made her heart sing
Sing the notes of good and bad
And now everyone wants her to be glad

Risking trouble with the law and parents
They had good times together
Just not enough
So he got tired of her

Everyone seems so happy that they are over
Why cant they see how much it hurts her
All she does is think of him
Over and over again

She doesn't say much
Whats there to say?
How she loved his touch and look in her eyes?
All she does is think of it and she cries

Hopefully they'll get back together
When shes sixteen
Parents will approve
Maybe

So until then
She'll breath in and breath out
Hope and wonder
Until the day shes ready to do without


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yesenia
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I love your poem because this is exactly what happened between me and my ex-boyfriend but no one approved of him,and now that were not together my parents are happy but I am not!I hope we get back together because I really love him.
 
Kimber Beasley
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That reminds me of me and my boi, That was great!!!!!!
 
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im not sure im youll get this commett brittany but you are a great poet and I know how you feel about that bc my bf is 18 and im 15(you wanted to know).no one liked us together but we stuck through we didnt care about them bc we were in love,but now im staying with my mom bc I lived with my aunt it didnt work out,but im moving with him soon!!! thankz for your commett
 


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