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Missing a Peice

By john
04.05.2005
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missing peice


	A Missing Peice By John Hawrylo III A missing peice in my puzzle of life Living without you is pain and strife An incomplete puzzle is what I've become All 1000 peices minus just oneI feel like a dog that has no tail to wag A drunk on the street with an empty brown bag A new pair of shoes without any laces A ten jack queen king without any aces A car without gas or a bike with no chain An amusement park when it's pouring rain A beautiful night without stars in the sky Stubbing my toe or a bug in my eye Pulling up my zipper a little too fast Realizing my exit is the one I just past Leaving my dinner in the oven too long Having to listen to my least favorite song Hailing a taxi thats already full Pushing when the sign clearly says pull Hitting the snooze button too many times Trying to think of something that rymes Throwing a dart and hitting the wall Someone sitting in the very next stall Knocking nine down but leaving one pin Falling off my bike and busting my chin So many things have given me scars I've fallen I've fought and I've been hit by cars But none of these things compared to when you Told me last night that we might be through The corners are there and the borders complete This puzzle of me would look pretty neat If only it wasn't missing that part That makes me whole and fills in my heart Submitted by john

Megan

1780 days ago Reply

This poem is awesome!!! keep writting, you're very creative!

Ashley

1780 days ago Reply

great job very creative

NiCole Howell

1780 days ago Reply

Yeh-
you get props...
-Salute

Katrina

1664 days ago Reply

Your poem was GREAT!
I loved reading it, and it has inspired me to be more creative with my work...You have given me some excelent idea's!
Please keep writing more!

Katrina

1664 days ago Reply

Prehaps there is some great lyrics you could use to make an awesome song!

"Pulling up my zipper a little too fast
Realizing my exit is the one I just past"...Very Funny!!hehe*

Kitten-Doe

1498 days ago Reply

I LOVE your work, your really poetic
if you put something in about a cat, I would of been more thrilled. I absolutely ADORE cats. MIOW MIOW MIOW. read my piece of work, i'm sure you'll be inspired.

Kitten-Doe

1498 days ago Reply

I LOVE your work, your really poetic
if you put something in about a cat, I would of been more thrilled. I absolutely ADORE cats. MIOW MIOW MIOW. read my piece of work, i'm sure you'll be inspired. There was just one glitch... your stuff, like totally rocks and all, but you just need to learn that boys who bake their own food, are like so MIOW! Ne-way, g2g MIOW and good luck for the future.......

petunia

1350 days ago Reply

You are such a sap. And it is spelled rhymes.

petunia

1350 days ago Reply

Great poem but you are such a sap. And it is spelled rhymes.

galadriel

414 days ago Reply

Very nice, two big thumbs way up!

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