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Cutting end my life

Cutting my wrists
To stop the pain
I cry one more time
Somebody please help me!
Of course my tears
Are my only answer
I hide in a coner
Where I wont be found
My wrist is bleedin
And I'm actually dyin
Yet I'm not scared
I'm happy
These years of pain
Are all over
And I can start new agian
But your face darts across
My mind
How can I leave you behind?!?
Suddenly I'm scared
I want you here
I want me in your arms
I want to live
But my cuts are there
And now I'm payin my price
Cause I can't say I love you...
One last time

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nicole
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i think your poem is really good. you explain how it feels to cut and and then like be dying but then relize you dont want.die. i relate to it so well.
 
Gothic Babe
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hey Erynne i am gettin help (thx 2 one of my friends)and ive been told writing helps me. so i write whats on my mind. i kinda need to express myself insted of expressin w/ my kinfe. and most of my friends have been suicidal, are still suicidal or have killed themselves. so i need to get rid of that pressure...im sry if my poems scare u its just how i feel!

Take care yalls...! <> <>
 
Katie
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hey Gothic Babe, awesome poems, I can relate to them a lot. haha...I've been told to write instead of cut too...
 
Anna
Anna
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Thats a realy realy good poem I realy liked it you can write good poems dont stop doin it
 
Ashley
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hey.., thats a really good poem it reminds me alot about myself and how I feel 88% of the time 9lol) well yeah keep one writing......peace
 
stolen_by_a_whisper
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wow that was great it explainz how love can be so ugly yet so wonderful
 


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