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A Fast Suicide

Submitted by Aisha
E-mail: Aisha_angel17@hotmail.com


A girl
A life
A wrist
A knifeA tear
A rip
A cut
A slit
A death
A fried
Whose Life ...
Did end.
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Rachel
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i like this poem it is short but yet it get to the point. i like your poem and i hope to read more of the:)
 
jenni
jenni
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wow! that got the point across.... i do that all the time... i wish it were that easy tho...
 
kelly
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gurl i know u have been gone thru alot of pai....i love this poem its short but really powerfull, please dont hurt ur self ..... xoxoxoxox if u want 2 talk mail me ..
kelly
 
ashlee
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wow this poem is short but it rocks and i love how you use the shortness to your advantage. love to talk to you somwtime

ashlee
 
Amanda
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I really like it .I feel just the same and i've wrote poems simuler but not quite as short. its very good and just no thers others that feel the same .
i'm there with you feeling preety much the same thing .
 
Britt
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its a good poem cuz it gets straight to the point u should keep writing
 
Amanda
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hey I dont know you but thats ok you should add me to hot mail and your poem it was unbelieveble my e-mail adress is nelly_rox162004@hotmail.com
 
Meagan
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that was a really good poem I like poems like that it makes me wanna cry but at the same time do wat they do jus to know what it feels like
 
Megan
Megan
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touching and sad but at the same time it is not right!
 
lilor
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thats true whoes life really did end. why doesnt anyone ever do anything when they know someone cuts. when they done a life ends.
 


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