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Caught in a Trance

Submitted by Zach Curtis
E-mail: JaredC87@sbcglobal.net


I don’t know what to say, when I look in your eyes,
I get caught in a trance, and I get butterflies.

With the feel of your touch, on the cheek of my face,
I float oh so high, as if in outer space.The warmth of your lips, as they softly kiss mine,
My heart starts to flutter, from a feeling so divine.

As you smile at me, I look at your face,
The best part of me, comes out in a race.

As you read this poem, I hope that you know,
I want to hold you forever, and never let you go.

Though the future is uncertain, and changing with time,
I hope and pray in my heart, you will always be mine.
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paris
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that is so sweet do you mind if i send this to my bf ill say that u wrote it but kan i??? coz this poem is the best i HAVE EVER HEARD
 
Zach
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I'd be more than happy if you used my poem. Thanks for the compliment.
 
paris
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thanx soo much zach you reali are the best poet ive met can u please submit sum more i go on everyday just to c wat ur nex poem will be u tryley are a genious. your gf should be sooooo proud of u thanx lotsa paris..
 


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