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Nobody Cares

By renee smith
26.02.2005
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nobody cares


	Submitted by "Renee Smith" E-mail: linlu8@aol.com Nobody cares about you Nobody wants to care Nobody listens You are aloneyou have no one in this life you feel useless and hopeless you start to question why you are even alive and why you were even born since nobody cares your school life isn't even worth talking about since it isn't good either you start to cry yourself to sleep at night praying it will all go away... but it doesn't so one day you have had enough you take the knife in your hand and stare a the blade and as you stare you start to cry but you know its the right thing to do but then you know its not you take the blade to your wrist all the people, memories, all the nights crying, everything comes into your mind but it doesn't stop you you start to cut yourself the crying stops but you start to bleed the bleeding doesn't stop, you cut yourself too deep you are panicking now you run to the kitchen to get a towel to stop the bleeding...it doesn't help you fall to the ground because of the loss of blood the last thing you hear is the phone rang and the answering machine picks up someone is calling for you and it is a guy who is saying how much he loves you and wants to be with you and he should have asked you out a long time ago but didn't have the guts... you finally see that someone does care about you but... now its too late because you are on laying on the kitchen floor, motion less... you have died because of one stupid mistake

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Kevin

1411 days ago Reply

That is awesome.

kelly

1410 days ago Reply

You have problems!!!!!!!!!

liz

1384 days ago Reply

that is soo sad.
dont worry i have a bad life
but dont let it get to you

1214 days ago Reply

What's sad is the few juvenile, insensitive comments.

They don't understand you, and they don't mind throwing it in your face,
as if your sadness is all about them.

They have no idea they're the problem.

And throughout life: each time they get dumped and divorced, they'll still have no idea. ;^)

Thanks Renee for posting -- nice to know someone feels like I do tonight.

GIOVANNA_13

258 days ago Reply

Lifes like that n problems just go away if you want them and if know how to aproach them. But that was a pretty cool poem.

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