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29.01.2005
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	Submitted by Camerone Garza United we stand, But not hand and hand. A world filled with no slavery Doesn't equal a world made of bravery.The truth is a blur it's mythical. So many lies told it's tragical. Our freedom is guaranteed, Yet we watch out brothers bleed. What will bring to us this year? The future for America is unclear. Our colors white, blue, and red. An unfortunate path our soldiers lead. One after another our people fell. America said a last farewell. Our people have gone through a separation. Among our brothers and through out our nation. We won the war but we were defeated. Our politics lied. We were cheated. Our dreams you hear and you smuther. I stand beside you, but your not my brother. They're across the seas. My brothers you sent. Then i'm told to believe in the government. Was i heard? I protested. Bring them home. I've requested. Our great leaders are being sent to the grave. What will be left of America home of the brave?

ben

1297 days ago Reply

That was a really good poem, the only flaw that I could really notice was that a few of the rhymes seemed forced and they didn't really flow. ex. brothers you sent and government.

Ashley

1168 days ago Reply

That poem was verry true all that happens now is very destrbing I enjoyed your poem alot

cristy

38 days ago Reply

that was one of thee greatest poems

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