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The Final Cut

Submitted by brooke
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you see her lying there hopeless and alone,
the blood dripping from her arm,
she thinks she's done no harm.

lying lifeless and dead,
the body's growing weaker as the minutes pass by,
her lifes flashing before her eyes.lying there crying out for help,
eyes are growing heavier as the tears fall,
this cut is the worst of them all.

lying on the floor screaming in pain,
they watch her as she slowly gives in,
this is where her death begins.

lying on the floor for this one last time,
gasping for air,
if only the world had cared.
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Emily
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wow, thats really deep... i love it, great job its really good... its tru too, i mean like yeah...its good...hope to c more...
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emily
 


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