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The Door

Submitted by Christina
E-mail: beautifulgurl_88@hotmail.com


I see a red door.
I see a key on the floor.
I pick it up and I unlock it.
I take a step on the other side of the door.The door closes behind me.
It's dark.
I can't see anything.
All of a sudden a light comes on
a man dressed in black appears
and tells me to follow him.
"Where am I?"
"Did I pass out?"
No response.
He brought me to a room.
So many people
So many unknown faces.
"Welcome to your new life he said"
and disappears.
I was looking left and right
wondering where the hell I was.
I saw a girl with a long cut on her neck
and a boy with cuts on his wrists.
I asked the boy what was going on.
"This can't be my new life?!"
"This just can't be right!"
He walked me to a mirror.
I saw a rope around my neck
and that's when it hit me
That I unlocked the lock to death.
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Steph
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I LOVE IT!
 
Megan
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This Poem is Great... Im Younger. And i am surrounded in friends that are suicidal!.. it sucks..but people these days slit there wrists like crazy..its pretty physco i think. but i guess they just aint happy with thereselves..everyone has problems..but people dont need to slit wrists to TRY and solve problems..because really..slitting wrists cause nothing but Pain..and loss of blood..so yeah.i like ur poems..there really cool!.. bye
 


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