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Already missin us

Submitted by Izabella
E-mail: sonrisa_092003@yahoo.com

The night it all happened, he thought he'd be all right
he thought he'd shake it off, just look forward to tomorrow
he thought he'd be with his friends and they'd cheer him up
he thought he'd meet some girls and remember his past
he thought he'd be ok
yeah, everything would be all right
little did he know, what he thoughthe thought of the thousands of times he just sat
and stared out the window
the window, that same stupid car window
he thought his friends would make it better
and they did, but only for a while
they could only numb the pain
he thought he'd go back to his old ways with girls
and it'd be alright
and it was, for a while

he met a girl, thought she was great
a pretty face, great smile, seemed like one to fall back on
but all she did was remind him of the one he lost
that scent, the wonderful smell
many would find it wonderful...sweet, so to speak
but he only found it painful
that SAME smell from the day he met her
that SAME smile from when he knew her
it only made him think of what he once had
and just like that one lost, she just walked around and away

i don't know why he can't learn that lesson
just one lesson, that he can't get into his head
don't fall into her arms, because she's just waiting to drop you
don't give her your trust, she's just waiting to tear it up
don't give her everything she's wanted; she's waiting to abuse it
and most of all,
don't give her your heart- she's waiting to break it....

***** My ex. wrote this poem for me...i mean its sweet and everything but at the evd it makes us girls look kind of bad...what do ya'll think *****

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Meagan
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omg!! that poem made me almost cry. wow. that was amazing i dont think it makes a bad name for girls.. i think it bring us into the perspective of a broken hearted male.. which is unknown territory for most women these days.. it broke my heart to see his heart breaking over and over. wow. amazing.. five stars and two thumbs up.
 


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